2. Text 3/4 (It looks fine at a glance.  There are misspellings and quite a few misplaced commas.  Spell-check works wonders.  I’m not really sure which is worse: too many commas or not enough.  They’re both distracting, though the extra commas make me pause if they’re not correct punctuation, since that is their only other use.  Also, on the main page, there is a place where four exclamation points are used.  Three would be a colloquial stretch.)

3. Content 3/4 (There is so much writing that I almost do not know where to start.  This is an amazing amount of content!  I would read it all if I had time.  Though there is much writing, the story is not exceedingly well-written.  Quality or quantity?)

4. Navigation 3/4 (The pages are mostly well-named.  I would just put them in some relevant order, preferably alphabetical.  “Bios” should be the full word, and make sure to name pages so visitors know exactly what to expect on that page.  Do not name the page the title which you would give to the article which is on the page.  Say what is on it.  Example: “Seasons” is close, but I would change it to something referring to what you would call it as a book or part of a book.  Seasons generally refer to a television show not a novel.)

5. Purpose 4/4 (Writing is one of the top purposes.  Any kind of entertainment which is wholesome is perfectly acceptable.  Though you should state how your web site takes the visitor to Myuri.  It is a tad difficult to see that the web site is all about writing without having to browse through more than the entry page.  The trick to viewers that browse is interesting them instantly.)

6. Network 3/4 (You have three links to relevant web sites.  The others are either to other members of your family or “WackyWay.”  That really has nothing to do with Myuri.  I have no problem with this; it just does not count. I personally only link to web sites that I know for sure that my visitors [unless there by mistake] would enjoy.)

Review by: The Elf Girl

Comments: Thanks so much! I've never received such a high score! (To anyone reading this- you have to see Shannon's website!)

Navigation: 10/10. Your navigation is efficient and easy to use. I love it! You’ve organized your nav bar in a clear, concise way. Everything is a logical order.

Organization: 10/10. Lovely work! Everything is absolutely organized and in place. I see no problems with this category at all.

Visual: 10/10. This is one of the strongest points of all the website. Your visual is absolutely gorgeous, stunning, and insightful. Every time I enter your website, it takes my breath away. You must be very skilled with HTML. I know I could never accomplish such a unique, professional, beautiful visual. Well done!

Creativity And Originality: 10/10. Wow. Your site is just so perfect! Again, I can find nothing wrong. The website is extremely creative. Almost every word is from your imagination! I adore it. The story is so magical. Every time I read it, I seem to drift from my home all the way to Myuri… excellent work.

Mechanics: 10/10. Flawless! What can I say? All your grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. is absolutely perfect.

Content: 10/-10. Wow! Another ten. Honestly, I cannot believe your content. You have extraordinary quality and extraordinary quantity. It would take me hours to get through all your material- but that’s an AWESOME thing. People are more likely to visit your site again, if you have lots of content to look at. Not only is that, but none of your content is pure rubbish. It all has a place and a meaning and a purpose. Love it.

Layout: 10/10. Oh my! Am I ever going to have to give you less than a ten?? Anyway, your layout is incredible, something I’d never be able to create. Unbelievable job.

Dedication: 10/10. Wow. It must have taken so much work to build such a great site.

Clarity: 10/10. Wonderful!!!

Overall: 10/10

Extra Points: +5 for your amazing visual and story- can’t get enough!

105%- A+

Review by: Golden Quill